Friday 24 November 2017

Don't deal with the DIceman


Don’t deal with the Diceman

Two brothers by the name of Mick & Mack fancied themselves a subway everyday, but the one faithful day they came across a pitch black alleyway. They had to have something for defence, so they carried a butter knife, but little did they know going through the alleyway there would change their life. The boys thought they would meet someone nice. Instead they found a sketchy figure whose head was shaped like a piece of dice. The man came closer, and the boys began to sweat. Then the man revealed his face saying, “would you like to make a bet”.

The brothers never had time to properly think a situation out, so they agreed without second thought, but by the end of the day, there will be a lesson the boys are taught. Before they could make a shake of the dice, the man explained some rules while looking for his head lice. He said that the boys had to get a total of seven when the dice has been rolled. Otherwise the boys would have to pay with their souls. Blinded by easy riches, Mick had forgotten about their cheating strategy and quickly rolled the dice. When the dice had stop rolling….
He had rolled a snake eyes!

The boys were on their knees and begged for another roll, and instead the man had spared their soul. Instead of the Diceman controlling the boys like voodoo dolls, he said they would have to retrieve 5 other souls.The Dice had aslo added to retrieve the souls by the sight of no light.The boys agreed it would take resilience and strength, to fight at the creatures with their limitless length.

First they came across MintberryCrunch, but with the enhanced power of their fists, they had defeated him with one punch. Then they came across Hilda Berg, but little did she know what was coming, well what we learn. On the way they met Goopa-Le-Grande, and the way they defeated was with the irritating voice of Ariana Grande. The boys said with confidence "you know, there always is a silver lining" but they never should've spoke to soon, for the sun stopped shining.

Due to the no longer sight of the shine, they would have to say goodbye, for one last time..
To be continued..

1 comment:

  1. Kiaora Mathan, my name is Ramsay, and I'm a student in Room 8. I like the way you caused suspicion when you did the to be continued bit. Also when you used descriptive vocabulary e.g. irritating, limitless, and situation. Keep up the great work. I look forward to hearing back from you. Do you enjoy writing fictional stories?

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