In our class, we have been told to write stories that would feature punctuation such as Ellipsis and Speech marks. What I enjoyed was making my story rhyme. What I could do next time is to add images.
Cuddles the Dog
Cuddles may have looked innocent to the human eye, but no one has ever experienced his dark evil side.
Cuddle’s owners had taken him out to spend a few dollars, then cuddles quietly whispered, “time to show my true colours”...
He nicked a few dimes, and a few cooking books. Then when people looked at him suspiciously, he just gave them the cute look.
After his successful heist, he felt like nothing could stop him. On his way, coming out the closet….
Fell a raggedy old Toboggan.
“CRASH”The owners immediately ran to see what happened to their cuddles, then they saw a bag of what they thought their dog had smuggled.
The owners investigated and finally found a trace, and with a quiet voice the owner said, “I arrest my case”...
He didn’t want to be known for his sin, so he pointed at a innocent dog and said “It was him”.
Everyone now was confused, soon enough confuddled. Though, by the size of the paw prints, it was obviously cuddles.
Cuddles was never forgiven for his crime, so he was locked up in the laundry for a long period of time.
Hi Mathan, I'm Dion from Room 8 and I really like this story about a dog called Cuddles because it was really funny and interesting. I also found some good words in the story too such as confuddled. I will be looking forward to seeing your next blog post Mathan.
ReplyDeleteHi Mathan, I'm Siale from Room 4 and I really like your story about that dog who looked sweet but he was actually evil, that was really funny. It was very funny when you said that Cuddles had to be locked in the laundry room for a long period of time. What does confuddled mean?
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