W.A.L.T: Use appropriate language features for a pick a path story. What I enjoyed was learning how to create a pick a path story. What I could do next time is to add more endings.
I am a Student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Friday, 22 September 2017
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Hey Mathan nice job! The path I took was ending 1 yay! I escaped it was fun kinda reminds me of the book the house of danger because that's a pick a path book nice job keep it up!
ReplyDeleteThank you Hayden for trying out my pick a path story. Thanks as well for saying that my story had a similarity to a another book that's probably twice as better as mine. You saying that meant a lot. Thank you very much.
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