Tuesday, 16 May 2017

Under the rug

Our class was given a photo along with the first sentence. We were then told to carry on from that sentence and write story, but we were told not to mention any deaths. What I enjoyed was being as creative as I want and adding a cliffhanger. What I could do next time is to be more creative

Under the rug
Two weeks have past and it happened again, the Darkness essence has come back to takeover innocent old Bobby’s poor soul. The Darkness decided to be sneaky and attack from under the rug instead of attacking head on from last time. Once Bobby caught sight of the essence, he attacked it with his nearest objects. The nearest object he could find was a chair, and like another person would do if they were attacked by a disease, he threw the chair at the Ebola, but it missed.  Then the Darkness jumped out of the rug and nearly reached Bobby’s body, but before the Darkness took over bobby’s soul, it was sucked from a vacuum. Bobby wondered who saved his life. Suddenly an anonymous wearing a black hoodie came out of the shadow’s. Bobby said, “who are you?”, the anonymous man responded, “I am your forgotten Brother!!!.” To be continued...

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