I am a Student at St Bernadette's Primary School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Thursday, 25 August 2016
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Today in Portugal,the sun maybe beaming on all the fans and supporters with a scorching hot 27 degrees,but they are well and truly excited to see the cyclists and I zoom past.Before the race was starting,standing in the truck loaded crowd was my coach,he was telling me new strategies to do in the race.After a long 45 minutes,we had reached halfway through the race,suddenly there was a bumpy track up ahead,at this point I was in doubt of finishing the race and getting a horrible injury instead,suddenly screaming from the crowd was my supporters encouraging me to overcome the bumpy road.
Soon enough we were getting close to the vast finish line then I just realized I had l well gone past the bumpy track ,and I would like to thank the supporters for it.Right now the cyclists and I were getting much closer to the finish line,so this is where I put the pedal to the medal and there was definitely no holding back.When we had zoomed past the finished line,I was too quick to know whether I came first.When me and the other cyclists went to check the re-play,I had come second place.
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